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Old 10-28-2010, 05:09 PM   #18
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Originally Posted by M T McGuire View Post
I was reading other people's stuff thinking "this is from the middle of a novel, it may not make sense". Like yours, people seem to be reading mine thinking "why hasn't anyone explained who these people are?" Leaving me thinking "er... I did in the preceding 99 pages".

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MTM
One would think that the words "Page 99" would give critiquers a clue. Some act like they're reading the opening page.

My most common critique involve the names of my characters. I write fantasy so I can't very well name them "John" or "Dorothy."
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