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kennyc · 10-28-2010, 07:01 AM

And now....

.....hot off the presses (crit welcomed):

Menace to Society

As I curse the traffic and attempt to merge
she bursts up behind me
crossing the gore zone
forcing her way into the fray.

I only catch a glimpse in my rear view mirror
a cigarette dangling from her red lips
ashes about to fall
one hand filled with Starbucks
the other clutching a mascara brush.

God knows what she’s driving with.

Kenny A. Chaffin – 10/28/2010

10-28-2010, 07:01 AM	#879
kennyc The Dank Side of the Moon Posts: 35,922 Karma: 119747553 Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Denver, CO Device: Kindle2 & PW, Onyx Boox Go6	And now.........hot off the presses (crit welcomed): *Menace to Society* As I curse the traffic and attempt to merge she bursts up behind me crossing the gore zone forcing her way into the fray. I only catch a glimpse in my rear view mirror a cigarette dangling from her red lips ashes about to fall one hand filled with Starbucks the other clutching a mascara brush. God knows what she’s driving with. Kenny A. Chaffin – 10/28/2010 Last edited by kennyc; 10-28-2010 at 07:32 AM.