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Originally Posted by Moe The Cat
The link to The Lens on your site's main page seems to be broken, Steve!
Edit: Sorry, it seems to be the link on your "Novels" page that is broken.
Your post above points to "the_lens.htm" but your "Novels" page points to just "lens.htm".
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Thanks for the catch... I had a few pages screw up their links, and I've been backtracking to get them all fixed. Hopefully that's the last of 'em.
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Originally Posted by crc
Were there any changes the first Kestral book? If so, I'll buy the series once the third book is re-released. (I missed the third book when it was originally available and have been looking forward to it since then)
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The changes to the first and second books have been minor... fleshing out a scene here or there, and fixing lines that were missed by the proofer (in most cases, me) the first time around. No new characters or chapters, or major revisions in the stories.
(One thing I'll say outright: Some of the scenes in both books featuring sexual activity have been expanded beyond "kissing, crashing waves, morning after" status. Nothing that would earn them an X-rating, but just further detail to bring them more to speed with modern novels.)
IOW, if you've already bought the original revision, don't feel you must buy the new revision. You won't be getting a different story, just a better-built version of the same story.
The third Kestral story,
The House of Jacquarelle, was slated for revision and re-release second in line after the next book... but I haven't decided which the next book will be! If it takes too long for me to pick one, I'll just go to
Jacquarelle instead.