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Old 10-22-2010, 06:56 PM   #106
William Campbell
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I'm just looking at the Serenity thing now. Ye gads, clunky interface is right. I'll need to click a few brain cells together on this one. I got one run on a sample, and yes, it looks like some good intelligence. It doesn't like 'like' though, as in an informal use for 'as if.' 'As ifs' are okay, but for colloquial narration and dialog, most people say 'like.' Not a big deal, but funny. Lots of other good warnings, though. Not all needing change without violating my established style, but good to have them called out. Knowing where you stand sort of thing. But a disaster if you just take every suggestion without consideration. I'll have to spend some time with it. Thanks for the link. Well worth having a look.
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