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Rumpelteazer · 10-11-2010, 07:05 PM

I just finished Brad McClure The Banshee House. I did like the story in itself but the writing isn't that good; his choice of words is often weird, the sentences often don't flow and there's too much information and dialogue that isn't relavant. In other words: the story needed a good editor.

I'm about to start Mary Ann Winkowski and Maureen Foley's The Book of Illumination.

10-11-2010, 07:05 PM	#6701
Rumpelteazer Grand Sorcerer Posts: 5,368 Karma: 27919658 Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Utrecht, the Netherlands Device: Kindle Paperwhite Signature Edition	I just finished Brad McClure The Banshee House. I did like the story in itself but the writing isn't that good; his choice of words is often weird, the sentences often don't flow and there's too much information and dialogue that isn't relavant. In other words: the story needed a good editor. I'm about to start Mary Ann Winkowski and Maureen Foley's The Book of Illumination.