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I just finished this. I thought it was pretty good, I just wished I had realized that you had updated it. I was getting kind of frustrated with all of the missing section breaks. I see in the revision that you put them in. I had only found a few mistakes like using "offers" instead of "officers" in one spot.
Now if you'll just work out the problems with Smaswords and EZread so I can by the sequel.
Etienne66
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