DG,
Certainly as it is it's 'fine', I'm more thinking from a stylistic perspective, we're getting down to personal tastes. I was worried that the indent-for-paragraph (with no line break) would be too cluttered on the Kindle, however now that I've seen it in 'real life' it's actually quite nice.
I'll spin a copy with the new style and see how it looks - maybe get some people to compare. When you get the pBook version you'll be able to see how I
really like it formatted (Quite excited for you to get it
)
Paul