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Originally Posted by pdurrant
Thanks for this — it does looks interesting.
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And it is quite fun, although at just over half-way, the first paragraph of Chapter 29 is a bit disappointing:
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Sinking fast but still gloriously bright, the nearly full blue moon sat just above the Pinnacle Mountains. The white moon, in the identical phase as her smaller blue sister, hung high in the Western sky.
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OK, this is a fantasy novel, and this is obviously not the Earth. But unless something extremely weird is going on, there's no way a moon about to set and a moon that's still high in the sky can possibly be in identical phase.