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You may wish to edit your banner - it doesn't make any grammatical sense. "Coming October 2010" and "Are you ready?" should be two separate sentences.
I read the short story you posted recently, "The Blood of Coldfrost" and, to be honest, you really, REALLY need to get help from a professional editor to give you some guidelines. Although it was a good story, the grammar was just ghastly. No matter how good a storyteller you are, grammar is a writer's toolbox, and if you don't know how to use those tools properly, people aren't going to read your books.
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