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A couple of more sentences that caught my eye last night.:
"Everything was repackaged, in variously sized featureless white gelatin capsules, which he was forbidden to open."
"He'd pushed the empty white bubble-pack, with its tiny, precisely handwritten notations of date and hour, in purple ink, far down into the seatback pocket.
Also noticed one long sentence fragment, similar to the one in the "would you keep reading" thread over in Self-Promotions. I don't know what happened with this book, but the editor really failed at his job.
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