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Originally Posted by queentess
I was curious by the initial description, then completely put off by this comment. I did look at the first 20 pages available as a sample on Smashwords, and I found the writing to be awkward. Lack or ill-use of commas, strange similes, over-use of the word "actually", short sentences... |
Actually, to, my dismay. I found, you, were like a dog on point. And, I actually have to agree, with you.