Thread: An editing problem I keep noticing
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Old 08-31-2010, 08:11 AM   #12
Steven Lake
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Now what would be fun would be to use that repeating as a way to keep the reader focused on the wrong thing so that when the answer appears, you drop a bomb on them because they're expecting something else.
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