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RE Dr Drib's epic fantasy in three slim volumes...
Hmm; it's a little dialogue-heavy, but there's an admirable lack of backstory. I feel the characters could have been fleshed out rather more - for instance, I'd have liked to know the name of the hero. (I also wondered whether 'vines' was in fact a typo and you intended to write 'veins'.)
On the whole, though, a good effort; and how many three-volume fantasy series can be enjoyed in less than a minute?
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