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Old 07-20-2010, 07:48 AM   #19332
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Originally Posted by nomesque View Post
Reading a review of DEAD(ish) *snort*



Does anyone else see the contradictions here? It's told from the POV of the characters, yet the sentence structure is too simple and *blink* I tell, not show *blink*
Good grief - an author being creative in their writing style? How dare you even think of such a thing!

(I'm ignoring the contradictions as trying to work out how you would have written Dead(sish) whilst keeping to the rules the reviewer holds dear is making my head hurt)
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