Reading a review of DEAD(ish) *snort*
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This writer breaks almost every rule there is to good writing. She uses the word "thing" to describe something, tells the reader what is happening rather than showing, and has very simple sentence structure. The book is from many different points of view, which would be interesting if done well. It's not. She writes so the characters are talking to the reader, which is unsettling and confusing.
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Does anyone else see the contradictions here? It's told from the POV of the characters, yet the sentence structure is too simple and *blink* I tell, not show *blink*