Damn it dadioflex. Now you're going to make me READ from my MOBILE!? What's wrong with you!? Are you MAD!?!?!?!? *puts a pebble by the pine tree*
I'll go back tomorrow and mercilessly stab your baby 17 times for you. But for now, if you want people to R/R, try posting it up to one of the million interwebs crit groups. If you just want people to read it, I say stick it on feedbooks
