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Old 07-12-2010, 02:49 PM   #174
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But the prose is terribly wooden, and the characterization remains at the level of a book for adolescents: there's something terribly schooly about it all.
As I read it I was thinking it was written by the book*. And I thought I'd have loved it if I was 15-25.

*i.e. a book on how to write
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