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Old 07-10-2010, 06:53 PM   #12
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I absolutely loved how you made such miserable problems and repairs into a hilarious comedy of errors.

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Epilogue.
The boat no longer resembles a fiery hell with tools untidily scattered. Beer has been quaffed. Penne con arabbiata is in the offing. There is more beer for the quaffing. The fire is OUT! The cement is cured!

FINIS
I'm glad it is all resolved and hopefully the rest of the summer will be much better..

This would be a great short story with a few more of those wonderfully descriptive details.
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