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Old 12-13-2013, 08:16 AM   #511
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Ging mit auf Reisen
Ein kleiner Teil des Herzens
Mit dem Paket fort
Wie romantisch...







...oder auch kitschig
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Old 12-13-2013, 09:21 AM   #512
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Wie romantisch...
...oder auch kitschig


Doppelseitig eben. Dazu dreierlei:

- Deen een sin uul is deen annern sien nachtigall.

- Hohoho. Muss ich das so verstehen, dass der Herr seine Weihnachtspakete von der Firma Axxxxx versenden lässt? Wie romantisch.

- Wenn das heißen soll: "Herr beachwanderer, wo bleibt denn das ernsthaft Negative?!" Na, das kommt, warte warte nur ein Weilchen.
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Old 12-13-2013, 12:15 PM   #513
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Das heißt in meiner Brust wohnen zwei Herzen, das eine sagt, wie romatisch, tiefsinnig und gefühlvoll. Das andere sagt: Igitt!

Ich wollte damit nur ausdrücken, mir gefiel dein Haiku. Ich kann mich nur manchmal nicht zurückhalten.
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Old 12-19-2013, 04:20 AM   #514
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@hamlok Sollst Dich ja auch nicht zurückhalten. - Mach doch selbst mal wieder einen Haiku.


Nachbars Teich ganz leer -
Fische im Kellerbassin.
Reiher legt Kopf schief.

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Old 12-19-2013, 01:46 PM   #515
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Karussell steht kinderlos
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Old 12-19-2013, 05:06 PM   #516
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Ganz genau. Hier auch so.

Dann mal jahreszeitlich weiter:


jeder Einkaufskorb
voller strahlender Engel
den HERRN zu preisen

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Old 12-26-2013, 09:30 AM   #517
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Rehe, paarweise
Frühnebel über Rauhreif
Weihnachtslandstraße

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Old 01-02-2014, 07:46 AM   #518
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Gutes Neues noch ...


Festhalten

Mit rotem Knallmüll
umkränzt. Im Kopfsteinpflaster.
Stilettoabsatz
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Der gereimte Winter-Haiku

13° am rhein!
soll das jetzt der winter sein?
das glaubt doch kein schwein!
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Old 01-09-2014, 04:08 AM   #520
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Gänseblumen blühn
Schneeglöckchen wächst unterm Busch
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flitzt über den weg wie nix!"
"is noch kein frühling?"
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Finnisches Hörnchen
hätte in seinem Kobel
gern weiter geschwitzt.
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Old 01-09-2014, 08:20 AM   #523
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Finnisches Hörnchen
hätte in seinem Kobel
gern weiter geschwitzt.
Inspiriert davon:

Das Eichhörnchen lauscht
ganz wachsam im Apfelbaum
Wasser tropft vom Zweig

Ich frage mich, warum das Hörnchen finnisch ist. Bist du in Finnland, heißen die bei euch so oder spricht das Hörnchen finnisch und wenn ja, was sagt es? So viele Fragen.
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Ich frage mich, warum das Hörnchen finnisch ist. Bist du in Finnland, heißen die bei euch so oder spricht das Hörnchen finnisch und wenn ja, was sagt es? So viele Fragen.
Hah! Herrliche Hörnchenhaiku heute.

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Fragen verdienen Antworten:

Wäre brucewelchs Hörnchen ein finnisches Hörnchen gewesen, dann hätte es den durch die anhaltend winterschlaf*unüblichen Außentemperaturen innen völlig überhitzten Kobel als Sauna umgenutzt und ihn nicht zu einem Spaziergang (der es unter anderem über den Weg von brucewelch führte) verlassen, zu dem es von der Annahme verleitet wurde, dass bereits Frühling sei.

Klar soweit?

*Ja, Winterruhe erlaubt Spaziergänge, aber das opfern wir der unterhaltenden Dichtung.

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Ein A- und B-Hörnchen-Dialog-Haiku

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