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Old 06-21-2012, 02:42 AM   #331
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Old 06-26-2012, 04:37 AM   #332
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Auch wenn noch nicht Donnerstag ist:

Ein fremder - wirklich meisterhafter - Haiku zwischendurch.

(Kurze Übersetzung von Tweet und Haiku:

Die Schüler einer 4. Klasse sollten Haiku schreiben.
Ein Kind schrieb dies. Es ist ein Meisterstück:

"Fünf Silben steh'n hier
sieben Silben mehr steh'n dort
Und? Nun zufrieden?
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Old 06-26-2012, 06:31 AM   #333
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Das erinnert mich an einen - ich hoffe, Ihr verzeiht mir - Vierzeiler:

Gebt den Kindern das Kommando
Sie berechnen nicht was sie tun
Die Welt gehört in Kinderhände
Dem Trübsinn ein Ende!
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Old 06-26-2012, 07:23 AM   #334
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Das erinnert mich an einen - ich hoffe, Ihr verzeiht mir - Vierzeiler:
Gebt den Kindern das Kommando
Sie berechnen nicht was sie tun
Die Welt gehört in Kinderhände
Dem Trübsinn ein Ende!
Ääh, Billi?! Moooment, meine Liebe.

Lass uns mal ganz kurz 'nen Kaffee trinken gehen, so auf halber Strecke in Neuruppin oder so. Ich glaube, wir müssen uns mal unterhalten ...


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Old 06-26-2012, 11:28 AM   #335
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Ups, das kommt davon, wenn man gegen die strengen Formvorgaben dieses Themas hier verstößt - bei drei Zeilen wäre alles in Ordnung gewesen! Dabei wollte ich nur das clevere Kerlchen loben und keinem hier auf die Füße treten!
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Ups, das kommt davon, wenn man gegen die strengen Formvorgaben dieses Themas hier verstößt - bei drei Zeilen wäre alles in Ordnung gewesen! Dabei wollte ich nur das clevere Kerlchen loben und keinem hier auf die Füße treten!
Da Du ja selber
Deinen Fehler schon einsiehst
Bleib ich mal ganz still


Hmmm, hat mit Haiku irgendwie nicht mehr so ganz viel zu tun, wo bleibt der Zeithinweis und die Emotion???

Apropos: Versuch einer neuen Ausdrucksform, das HAIMOTICON










Kann man sich jetzt streiten ob es Silben oder Bedeutungsinhalte sind, ich habe Silben genommen.

Soll Übrigens heissen:



Aufstehn,-zur Arbeit;
Mist bau'n, Ansch.. einfangen !!!
Ab Morgen Urlaub...
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Old 06-26-2012, 05:49 PM   #337
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Vielleicht kann ich ja damit etwas gut machen, selbst wenn es mit der Silbenanzahl noch etwas hapert:

Hohe Schule der Haikukunst
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Old 06-27-2012, 03:09 AM   #338
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Old 06-27-2012, 08:05 AM   #339
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Auch wenn noch nicht Donnerstag ist:

Ein fremder - wirklich meisterhafter - Haiku zwischendurch.
Passend zum Thema, aber ich weiß nicht, ob der schonmal hier war:

Haiku are easy,
but sometimes, they make no sense:
Refridgerator!
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Old 06-28-2012, 02:54 AM   #340
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@Manichean: Doch, auf den und andere hattest Du, weit oben, schon mal hingewiesen

Von letzter Woche / Kieler Woche

Dat Containerschipp
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Old 06-28-2012, 08:43 AM   #341
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Der Traum ist vorbei,
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Vor den Touristen aufstehen.

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heckenschnitt geschafft
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