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Old 10-27-2011, 08:27 AM   #226
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Regenverhangen -
das Lesen eines Haiku
zaubert ein Lächeln


oder

Regenverhangen -
ich glaube die Wolke weiß
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Old 10-27-2011, 03:25 PM   #227
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Old 10-28-2011, 03:54 AM   #229
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Eine Vollbremsung
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Old 10-28-2011, 04:36 AM   #230
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Ooh... schön geschrieben.
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Old 10-28-2011, 05:03 AM   #231
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Eine Vollbremsung
Das Reh läuft munter weiter
Mein Herz klopft wie wild
Schwein gehabt... in einem anderen Universum hättest du vielleicht geschrieben:

Eine Vollbremsung
Das Reh bleibt reglos liegen
Heute Abend gibt es Wildbret
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Old 10-28-2011, 07:10 AM   #232
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Als Haiku eher:

Eine Vollbremsung
Das Reh bleibt reglos liegen
Am Abend Wildbret


Aber das Original gefällt mir VIEL besser!

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Old 11-01-2011, 10:55 AM   #233
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Aber das Original gefällt mir VIEL besser!
Mir auch. Mein letzter, und bisher einziger, Wildunfall ist weniger als ein Jahr her. Auch Reh. Auch ohne Wildbret am Abend, da das Tier sich von dannen machte. Dafür mit einer recht teuren Reparatur. Ich ziehe die kollisionsfreie Variante deutlich vor...
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Old 11-03-2011, 04:28 AM   #234
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Wildunfälle sind fies. Gut, dass es bei Dir noch mal gut gegangen ist Gudy!
(PS: Wild mitnehmen ist übrigens natürlich nicht ratsam. Polizei und StA müssen da wg. Jagdwilderei immer gleich 'ran.)

Wir bleiben beim Thema Herbst:

Der Baum trägt Tonsur
die Brücke führt heut' ins Nichts
Tropfen auf der Hau
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Old 11-10-2011, 02:58 AM   #235
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Woche 'rum?
Na dann

Zwei Krähen streiten.
Doch mit der Beute entkommt
die Silbermöwe.


Schönen Donnerstag!
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Old 11-11-2011, 08:15 AM   #236
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grad noch donnerstag
und schon vorbei, vergangen -
haiku vergessen

donnerstag gestern,
auch freitag schon im gange -
wochenende naht
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Old 11-17-2011, 03:03 AM   #237
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No fresh milk today
as the milkman needs honey
and milk for himself.

Verschnpfter Rüssel
Rund um den Elefanten
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Old 11-17-2011, 06:42 AM   #238
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dunkel zur arbeit
und auch dunkel nach hause -
wintermantelzeit!


Anmerkung: ich würde den Elefantenhaiku umstellen und den verstopften Rüssel quasi als Pointe bringen ...

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Old 11-17-2011, 05:19 PM   #239
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Anmerkung: ich würde den Elefantenhaiku umstellen und den verstopften Rüssel quasi als Pointe bringen ...
Hatte auch kurz darüber nachgedacht. Es ging mir dann aber weniger um die Pointe, als das aus Gründen ernsthaft gefühlte Warnbedürfnis für meine Umgebung; äh, ich meine natürlich die Umgebung des Elefanten .

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