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Old 09-08-2011, 02:31 AM   #196
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Leises Wellenspiel.
Vor verwischtem Himmelblau
Buhnenkopf im Dunst.


(Nachwirkung vom letzten Sonnabend )
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Old 09-08-2011, 04:06 AM   #197
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Buhnenkopf

Aber wikipedia sagt uns zumindest was Buhnen sind und gesehen habe ich sie auch schon, nur hatte ich dafür keinen Namen.
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Hamburger, was ist aus Deiner Beziehung zur Elbe geworden?

Ich erinnere mich jetzt dunkel, vor sehr langer Zeit hier im Forum mal ein Foto gepostet zu haben, das die im Haiku beschriebene Szene eigentlich perfekt darstellt. Ich habe nur keine Ahnung mehr wo. In den Alben ist es jedenfalls nicht. Na, egal.

Lehrmodus an:

Der Buhnenkopf ist jedenfalls das wasserseitige Ende der Buhne.

Was wir unseren Kindern hier beibringen (und dann anhand muschelzerschnittener Touristenhände und -beine illustrieren) ist, dass man lieber nicht auf Buhnen laufen und vom Buhnenkopf springen sollte, denn dies nicht zu tun schont
1) die teuren Küstenschutzanlagen.
2) die Gesundheit, denn an den Buhnen gibts schöne scharfe Miesmuscheln und dort ist (insbesondere bei etwas Wind und Dühnung, die wir hier ja auch manchmal haben, wenn auch nicht im Nordseeausmaß) die Strömung am stärksten und nicht immer berechenbar. Schon gar nicht für "Kurze".

Lehrmodus aus.

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Old 09-08-2011, 04:56 AM   #199
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Old 09-13-2011, 06:23 PM   #200
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Nach langer Zeit mal wieder, dafür ist heute auch kein Donnerstag:

Splitternder Klang der
Regentropfen auf Wasser.
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Old 09-15-2011, 02:30 AM   #201
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Die freche Katze!
Sitzt auf dem Schuppen und nascht
meine Fliederbeer'n.
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Old 09-22-2011, 02:15 AM   #202
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Schon wieder Donnerstag!? Na gut:

Die Funken wirbeln -
doch so hoch sie auch steigen -
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Old 09-23-2011, 07:26 AM   #203
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Wahrscheinlich sollen
Amerikanerinnen
Haikus nicht wagen.

Grammatisch geseh'n
werd' ich mich bestimmt irren...
macht aber doch Spaß!
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Old 09-29-2011, 02:23 AM   #204
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@Nancy Fulda: Nur weiter, ist doch alles zum Spaß .

Ich erhebe für mich ja auch um Himmels willen nicht den Anspruch, hier "Haiku" im "echten" literaturwissenschaftlichen Sinne zu machen. Das bleibt den Japanern und ihrer Sprache vorbehalten. Es ist halt nur ein Etikett für die kleinen Momentaufnahmen, die man so von seiner Umgebung macht. Als Sprachschnappschuss sozusagen. (Hm, gefällt mir. Diesen Begriff lasse ich mir jetzt schützen. ). Und irgendein formendes Gerüst ist da immer nützlich. Also: Immer ran!

Und nun zur Sache:

Im Parkmorgendunst
gehen die Motorsägen
paarweise spazieren.

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Old 09-30-2011, 03:12 AM   #205
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Ich erhebe für mich ja auch um Himmels willen nicht den Anspruch, hier "Haiku" im "echten" literaturwissenschaftlichen Sinne zu machen. Das bleibt den Japanern und ihrer Sprache vorbehalten.
Fast würde ich gerne Japanische lernen, wenn nur deswegen, um die Haiku im Originalform zu erleben.

Hier meine Bemühungen von gestern Abend:

Die Kinder schlafen;
geprägt ins Gesicht die Glut
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Die Schultür schließt sich
und der Unterricht beginnt.
Herbstregen endet.



Und, nachgetragen, noch ein Sondersprachschnappschuss
vom letzten Sommerwochenende:


Grillfleisch unterm Arm
und ganz laut fröhlich pfeifend
durch Stollenreihen

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Ja, es gab da schon merkwürdige Erscheinungen, z.B. ich in Shorts mit Lebkuchen im Einkaufswagen...
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Mit beiden Lampen
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Der Sand am Ufer
häuft sich in kleinen Wellen;
winzig Gebirge.


(Ich war mit den Kindern heute wohl zum letzten mal am Strand, bevor der Winter hereinbrecht. Den Sonnenschein werde ich schmerzlich vermissen...)
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