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Old 09-29-2009, 09:29 PM   #1
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There is a Whale in My Heart and My Heart is Sad like a Forlorn Walrus-Ass

There is a Whale in My Heart and My Heart is Sad like a Forlorn Walrus-Ass

i feel alone

when I try to cry the
walrus-ass squeaks Hello
in a pained voice

it felt alone.

"I'm lonely" squeaks the forlorn
walrus out of its lonely ass

"i will be your friend" i told the walrus
face to face. it said
thank you.

i did not feel alone.
the walrus did not feel alone.

the waves washed
the walrus onto my beach

the walrus could not breathe my air
and there was no water
it died

but it did not die alone

when it died

i was alone again

i feel alone and hungry

i am a vegetarian but i may break my vow
if i have to

i feel alone

thank you for reading my poem

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Old 09-30-2009, 03:19 AM   #2
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I'm a vegetarian too - but if the walrus is already dead ....
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Old 09-30-2009, 04:34 AM   #3
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