|Yesterday, 05:51 PM||#1|
Join Date: Jan 2013
Location: Itasca, Illinois
Device: Kindle Touch Sony PRS300
looking for new cover feedback
It's Contemporary Fiction. Here's the blurb: (thanks!)
It’s the last chance for law intern Mary Maloney. She’s flunked the bar exam twice and if she fails again she’ll lose her law internship, her home and what’s left of her self-respect. Things haven’t been made any easier by her boyfriend, Tom, breaking up with her to spend six months in Thailand following his dream to be a professional golfer. Alone and lonely, Mary falls under the sway of her high-powered attorney boss. She realizes too late that she's fooling herself—her boss is just a player, and besides, her heart still beats only for Tom.
Now Tom charges back into the picture. He’s seen the light and swears undying love and devotion. Mary’s thrilled! Life is definitely on the upswing. There’s just this one little troubling detail—she hasn’t had her period in months.
She slept with her boss only once after a New Year’s Eve party in a Miami penthouse. But she’s a runner—runners miss periods all the time. No, she couldn't be pregnant. She’d swear to it in a court of law. It has to be the case because Tom’s from a strict Italian Catholic family, where abortion or a child out of wedlock are absolutely unforgivable sins.
And ready or not the bar exam is barreling down on her. How will she conquer it with so many influences scattering her attention? Or is she facing an even bigger test?
|Yesterday, 06:28 PM||#2|
Well trained by Cats
Join Date: Aug 2009
Location: (The original) Silicon Valley, USA
Device: Astak Pocket Pro, K4NT,Galaxy Tab 2
Center Lines offset (Move Human left)
The Nose lines up with Lady Justices Head
Lady Justice larger?
Face to the right (over the Scales) ?
I know we don't get to mess with the Authors font/size
|Yesterday, 07:26 PM||#3|
Just a Yellow Smiley.
Join Date: Jul 2015
Device: K4, K5, fire, kobo, galaxy
Not liking the giant face, but that could just be me. I hate eyes on book covers. They creep me out.
And yea, it looks like she blew Liberty out of her nose.
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