Register Guidelines E-Books Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

Go Back   MobileRead Forums > E-Book Uploads - Patricia Clark Memorial Library > BBeB/LRF Books

Notices

Reply
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread
Old 10-13-2007, 03:09 PM   #1
Nate the great
Sir Penguin of Edinburgh
Nate the great ought to be getting tired of karma fortunes by now.Nate the great ought to be getting tired of karma fortunes by now.Nate the great ought to be getting tired of karma fortunes by now.Nate the great ought to be getting tired of karma fortunes by now.Nate the great ought to be getting tired of karma fortunes by now.Nate the great ought to be getting tired of karma fortunes by now.Nate the great ought to be getting tired of karma fortunes by now.Nate the great ought to be getting tired of karma fortunes by now.Nate the great ought to be getting tired of karma fortunes by now.Nate the great ought to be getting tired of karma fortunes by now.Nate the great ought to be getting tired of karma fortunes by now.
 
Nate the great's Avatar
 
Posts: 10,439
Karma: 3264495
Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: DC Metro area
Device: Shake a stick plus 1
Poe, Edgar Allan: The Raven. v1.0 13 October 2007

I did not like the previous version of this poem, so I did my own.

Note: I reduced the font size to 8 so the lines are not split on my Reader. It looks good.
This work is in the Canadian public domain OR the copyright holder has given specific permission for distribution. It may still be under copyright in some countries. If you live outside Canada, check your country's copyright laws. If the book is under copyright in your country, do not download or redistribute this work.

To report a copyright violation you can contact us here.
Attached Files
File Type: lrf THE RAVEN.lrf (41.1 KB, 288 views)
Nate the great is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-14-2007, 12:57 AM   #2
JSWolf
Resident Curmudgeon
JSWolf ought to be getting tired of karma fortunes by now.JSWolf ought to be getting tired of karma fortunes by now.JSWolf ought to be getting tired of karma fortunes by now.JSWolf ought to be getting tired of karma fortunes by now.JSWolf ought to be getting tired of karma fortunes by now.JSWolf ought to be getting tired of karma fortunes by now.JSWolf ought to be getting tired of karma fortunes by now.JSWolf ought to be getting tired of karma fortunes by now.JSWolf ought to be getting tired of karma fortunes by now.JSWolf ought to be getting tired of karma fortunes by now.JSWolf ought to be getting tired of karma fortunes by now.
 
JSWolf's Avatar
 
Posts: 37,005
Karma: 18129756
Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: Roslindale, Massachusetts
Device: Sony Reader PRS-650, iPad, nook STR
I found a few things that do need correcting.

Code:
Is there--_is_ there balm in Gilead?--tell me--tell me, I implore!"
Take that line.. _is_ should be is. _ are used to denote italics. Also -- should be — (em dash). Other then that I think it's fine.
JSWolf is offline   Reply With Quote
Reply

Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search

Forum Jump

Similar Threads
Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
Poetry Poe, Edgar Allan: The Raven. May 2007 Roy White BBeB/LRF Books 1 05-03-2012 09:07 AM
Poetry Poe, Edgar Allan: The Raven (illustrated). v1 18 November 2007 RosanaE BBeB/LRF Books 9 11-22-2007 10:55 AM
Poetry Poe, Edgar Allan: The Raven. v0.9 13 October 2007 Nate the great Kindle Books 0 10-13-2007 03:05 PM
Poetry Poe, Edgar Allan: The Raven. IMP v0.9 13 October 2007 Nate the great IMP Books 0 10-13-2007 03:04 PM
Poetry Poe, Edgar Allan: The Raven, Illustrated by Gustav Dore. June 2007 Roy White BBeB/LRF Books 5 07-04-2007 12:20 PM


All times are GMT -4. The time now is 09:27 PM.


MobileRead.com is a privately owned, operated and funded community.