06-04-2008, 03:02 AM | #16 |
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Out of the dark and mysterious void,
Came a thunderously loud humanoid. "This will end in tears," he said, So I turned around and went back to bed. But into the bed came the humanoid, With an evil look in 'is eye... "Preparation H is awl I noyd" 'Cuz we serve it for dinner with pie. Then it directed my gaze to the heavens, The Blue One. Next to the fish! I flew here on rainbows with fins. Is this some kind of death wish? No; merely wish-fulfilment, I thought, Now two wishes left. I guess I ought To do what I knows best, and |
06-04-2008, 03:49 PM | #17 |
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Go play with the Toys what I bought.
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06-04-2008, 04:48 PM | #18 |
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So I lined up all the toys,
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06-04-2008, 05:20 PM | #19 |
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(Sorry I missed this thread... anyone care to try an actual collaborative poetry form? Renga, the father of haiku? Let me know and I'll think of a way to organize it so we don't have multiple replies on a single stage...)
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Good thinking, Master PH. A clear set of instructions, particularly for some lower lifeforms like me, would be most helpful. EDIT: No, no, hell no. Not part of the poem. |
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Now, where did we get to?
Out of the dark and mysterious void, Came a thunderously loud humanoid. "This will end in tears," he said, So I turned around and went back to bed. But into the bed came the humanoid, With an evil look in 'is eye... "Preparation H is awl I noyd" 'Cuz we serve it for dinner with pie. Then it directed my gaze to the heavens, The Blue One. Next to the fish! I flew here on rainbows with fins. Is this some kind of death wish? No; merely wish-fulfilment, I thought, Now two wishes left. I guess I ought To do what I knows best, and Go play with the Toys what I bought. So I lined up all the toys, and called all the girls and boys "Good thinking, Master PH. A clear set of instructions, particularly for some lower lifeforms like me, would be most helpful". He said, interjecting a light note of concern... |
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Out of the dark and mysterious void,
Came a thunderously loud humanoid. "This will end in tears," he said, So I turned around and went back to bed. But into the bed came the humanoid, With an evil look in 'is eye... "Preparation H is awl I noyd" 'Cuz we serve it for dinner with pie. Then it directed my gaze to the heavens, The Blue One. Next to the fish! I flew here on rainbows with fins. Is this some kind of death wish? No; merely wish-fulfilment, I thought, Now two wishes left. I guess I ought To do what I knows best, and Go play with the Toys what I bought. So I lined up all the toys, and called all the girls and boys "Good thinking, Master PH. A clear set of instructions, particularly for some lower lifeforms like me, would be most helpful". He said, interjecting a light note of concern... "So, what's next?", asked master Geoff, |
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"Vivaldi, Sir, direct the music - play on"..
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Did the humanoid eyes see the bass clef?
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"So, what's next?", asked master Geoff,
"Vivaldi, Sir, direct the music - play on".. Did the humanoid eyes see the bass clef? Who's conducting? Let's pass the baton. |
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And the hairy great monster on the bassoon,
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Beepbeep n beebeep, yeah!
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Quoth the Robot: "The Blue One, next to the Fiche!"
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Not the micro--the other one!
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So the bassoon ran off with the oboe ....
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