01-29-2013, 12:07 PM | #1 |
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A poem I wrote
Hi guys, I think sometimes it's best to express ourselves using poems. This is a poem named "Lost" that I wrote. I'm not a native English speaker and English is not even my second language, not to mention that fact that I don't know beans about the English verse, so please forgive me if there are any foolish use of the language and inappropriateness. It's rather short and I hope it's understandable and tolerable enough.
Lost Oh how I miss the good old days When people were nice and tender-hearted When I had trees to climbs and birds to raise And green fields where I would rest on with my buddies, feeling contented But now I feel lost and deeply wretched Craving for love and companionship and warmth For out there people themselves are struggling in their tiring orbit Or perhaps with this disgrace I must come to terms I would turn to angels then ‘Cause by hearsay they’re pure and benevolent Yet where they are and how to find them are beyond my ken I’m crushed, impoverished, and disheartened… |
01-31-2013, 02:52 PM | #2 |
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Hey, we've got a thread of people writing poetry. You ought to join them! Let's see if I can find that thread ..... here it is!
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01-31-2013, 09:26 PM | #3 |
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Thank you badgoodDeb! I didn't know then. I'll try there.
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