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07-12-2017, 08:06 PM | #17 |
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As I've progressed in my path as a writer, I've learned many things. Most importantly, the quality of my writing has improved.
I've done a thorough re-edit of Dralin, removing over 2000 unnecessary words that slowed down the flow. All links in the first post of this thread now have the new cleaner version. The story hasn't changed, but it's much easier to read. All my best. |
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A beautifully-worded promotion. I don't know if I have your book, but I'll check right now. ADDED: I didn't have, but now I do. It's FREE, by the way, from Amazon [U.S.A.]. --- THANK YOU! Last edited by Dr. Drib; 07-12-2017 at 08:39 PM. |
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Grabbed it.
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07-12-2017, 10:40 PM | #20 |
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You're welcome. And thank you for giving it a shot. It makes me absurdly happy every time someone does.
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