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Old 06-25-2013, 09:41 AM   #16
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Another person suggested wishing on a falling star - that seems to incorporate best. But thanks for the ideas!
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Old 06-25-2013, 11:10 AM   #17
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Don't for get the Pinocchio style tales either...
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Old 06-25-2013, 11:14 AM   #18
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Another person suggested wishing on a falling star - that seems to incorporate best. But thanks for the ideas!
I tried wishing on a star often when I was a kid. Didn't work though. I stayed an only child.
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Old 06-25-2013, 11:33 AM   #19
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story finished - about 1,000 words. anyone want an alpha draft, pm me with your email address.
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Old 06-26-2013, 06:23 AM   #20
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hm. I'm not sure how I could work that into my story - it's about a little couple trying to have a baby, and buying into all the myths. It's actually an adoption story, so there's no sex ed in it - it's for a bit of a younger crowd.
Sleeping the night on the ancient Cerne Giant hill carving to bring fertility.

Writing a wish down and burying it in the garden, perhaps? I heard that in Africa.

You could try another way of course but its been done before. A wood carver and his wife always wanted a little boy.......
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How about this as the basis of a myth:
Ripley's Fertility Statues
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hey, this is a children's story!
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Old 06-26-2013, 05:42 PM   #23
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hey, this is a children's story!
True, but even so such a statue could be worked into a story I'd think. Maybe the mother tells the kid that she went on a quest to a shrine where such a statue is to be found and shortly after she had her baby delivered by some miraculous way or something.
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the baby story is finished, and I think it's pretty good.

now, if someone wants to write an intense quarrel or fight scene for me.... I don't do conflict well, but as someone pointed out in another forum, people rationally talking out their differences and coming to a compromise makes for a rather boring ending.
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the baby story is finished, and I think it's pretty good.

now, if someone wants to write an intense quarrel or fight scene for me.... I don't do conflict well, but as someone pointed out in another forum, people rationally talking out their differences and coming to a compromise makes for a rather boring ending.
True, story = conflict more often than not.
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Even my psychiatrist tells me I'm too nice. My kids and husband agree. It makes writing conflict scenes really difficult.
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