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Old 06-14-2011, 11:59 PM   #16
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My 2 cents-worth: Timeline is the most critical, don't mess with that. I aim at a chapter length of about 6k words for a p-book but only about 3-4k words for an e-book, because most users typically use a font size larger than printed matter so have more page-turns, and page-turns are what subconsciously register as "length". You'll never achieve your "target" chapter length but that really doesn't matter – it's just an ideal, easy chunk of text to read with a logical start and end point. Long chapters tend to be a bit daunting for most users, none of us like to put a book down before we get to a break point.
Changing POV and re-telling a story with a different perspective should usually be part of the same chapter.

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Old 06-19-2011, 05:35 PM   #17
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Responding primarily as a reader, I agree with a lot of what's been said. Poor chapter break placement can really break up the flow of an otherwise good book. I don't mind short chapters (although they used to bug me), I don't mind long chapters. What I do mind is when a chapter break occurs for no apparent reason. I agree with thinking of it like a play, and you make you breaks based on scenes, or even where a commercial break would be in a TV show (maybe the same scene, but there's been a cliffhanger or a new piece of information presented).

Another thing that can be very frustrating about chapter breaks is when they always occur after the same type of chapter ending. I read a book once that was pretty entertaining, but the chapter breaks always came after a (manufactured) mini cliffhanger. That gets old really fast, especially when there are some 25 chapters. Most of those cliffhangers really made no sense.
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Old 06-19-2011, 09:56 PM   #18
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I've read writers that have varying chapter lengths -- anything from a page or two to fifteen or twenty pages in the same book. I don't think it matters that much. It doesn't matter to me when I'm reading, though I think I have been guilty of breaking scenes up just to get the right length. I'm trying not to worry about it so much with the book I'm writing at the moment.
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Old 06-20-2011, 12:05 AM   #19
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On average, my chapters are 3,000 words. This works for me to set the scene, describe the characters and action, deliver a solid plot point, and move on. This helps me keep the pace consistent throughout the book to avoid saggy middles and rushed endings.
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