08-22-2010, 01:51 PM | #1 |
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Dialog Driven Stories
Hey, I'm writing my first Novel. On the 2nd draft of a 80k+ book. But I realized today that the book is 99 percent driven by the character's dialog and body expressions as described by the narration. I really just want the characters to tell the story and not so much a disembodied voice. But it's starting to look more like a Script than a Book.
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Here's the opening from Fletch (the rest of the chapters are also 99% dialogue) Quote:
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I remember going into one of the big paperback houses some years ago and they had a formula. I think it was 1 page of dialog for every 3 pages of description. That's why you have all that horrid description in books that you skim over in order to get to the story.
Just a caution. Make sure your characters are talking about something interesting/pertaining to the story. Real life conversations can be pretty boring. And Moejoe, I'm not dying off anytime soon. |
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One of my favorite science fiction stories was Santiago by Mike Resnick. It's almost all dialog. Personally, I love dialog. I use a lot of it, too, but many readers like visuals: knowing what the room looks like, for instance. Something to keep in mind.
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Thank you guys for the input. I would've naturally added more narrative initially if it wasn't for the fact that the dialog is really interesting and propels the story really well.
It's a book of many words and conversations, but various people really have fun reading the dialog and getting into the characters (at least so far). |
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If you're concerned that because you have a dialog heavy story, its unsalable or no major publication will want it....well then they can go ef themselves. As long as your characters aren't just discussing their day or the weather, or their interpetation of the grapes of wrath, or whatever doesn't propel the action forward, then you should be good to go. Every line of dialog should advance the story in some way / shape or form. Of course, these are broad definitions of "advance the story." And Robin, don't mind our crotchety old british friend. He's just...British! I also love the rule of three. It's just enough to stir the imagination without being heavy handed and Jordanesque. The Rule of Three is my friend. You don't need to engage all five senses all the time to tell a convincing story. Some of the best things are left unsaid. Speaking of which, I should be writing. I've wasted entirely too much time slacking off today. Last edited by jaxx6166; 08-22-2010 at 11:38 PM. |
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The dialog moving the story along works a lot better with the two main characters because they're both those types that read heavily into non-verbal communication. Helps when writing because given their high intelligence and attentive comprehension, it saves the back and forth of 'What?' and 'Why?s' They have a pretty good idea what the other person is and isn't saying. I do leave many elements unsaid. There are a lot of implications that get validated later on slowly as the story progresses. But I leave a lot unsaid, ambiguous, and make sure the reader knows I left some loose ends. It also strangely works in the romantic development of the main characters, since withholding inconsequential facts from a partner teases their curiosity considerably. My favorite so far as been some really dreadful accusations befall on the male character. The type that as a reader I would really want to know if they're true or not. Most stories there is a moment of heavy soul crushing confessions to dispel rumors. The character eventually addresses each one, but at a moment of his choosing. Only telling his partner when contextually she has a first hand insight into his rational. |
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Yes indeedy. In fact, if you transcribe almost any real-life conversation it will be not only boring but almost unreadable, littered with ums and ahs, non sequiturs and grammatical errors. Writing good dialogue is a great test of a writer's skill. You have to make it seem real, while paying careful attention to the order of words to avoid misleading the reader, and the choice of vocabulary and usage in dialogue is critical to establishing the speaker's character.
Dialogue is much faster and often more entertaining to read than descriptive prose, and if you can pull off a good story using mainly dialogue you should be onto a winner! |
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Robert B. Parker's books are mainly dialogue, from what I've read. He's prolific, and I'm sure that keeping down the narrative helps!
I have a friend who loves his stuff for this reason, says she can breeze through one of his books in two hours. I find them rather non-engaging for that very reason and don't bother to breeze through them at all. So it's a matter of preference. |
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Generally speaking, a novel is composed of three elements: dialogue, action and exposition (explanation).
I don't think there are any rules in writing that have to be followed, but what I've been taught is that the three elements should be in a rough balance. I don't consciously think about this when writing, but I'd say that most of what I've written follows this rule -- and probably because I've unconsciously picked it up from reading. When I read something that is heavily weighted one way or the other, I do find that it becomes a bit tedious. For example, at the moment I am reading Jeffrey Eugenides "The Virgin Suicides", which is almost all exposition. It's a good book, but it just stays on this one tone, and you get to a point where you've had enough of it. |
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I prefer books with mostly dialog. A book with mostly descriptions bores me. Write what you like, not what you think we readers should like. In the end, if the book is good and you like it, then we will like it too.
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