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09-10-2010, 02:04 AM | #1 | |
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Neptune Crossing in Kindle and Smashwords -- SF by Jeffrey A. Carver
Hi folks -- This is to let you all know that I have just put my novel Neptune Crossing up for sale in the Kindle store and at Smashwords, for $2.99 DRM-free. This novel, published in print by Tor Books, is the opening volume of my series The Chaos Chronicles--which recently picked up after a hiatus with Sunborn, and will continue in due course with The Reefs of Time. Here's a brief description and a few review quotes:
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This is all part of a continuing experiment on reaching out to more readers, which I described recently on my blog. Oh--one thing is different from the freebies, the cover. My use of the Tor cover was allowed strictly for promotional giveaway, perfectly understandable, so I created my own cover for this edition. Here it is: Neptune Crossing at Kindle Neptune Crossing at Smashwords Last edited by starrigger; 09-10-2010 at 02:17 AM. |
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09-10-2010, 07:53 AM | #2 |
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I enjoyed "Neptune Crossing" so much as a free download I went and purchased a copy at Smashwords. I have read all of the John Bandicut books and love them - looking forward to the next installment. Write faster.....
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09-10-2010, 01:45 PM | #3 |
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Oh, Jeff, we need to get you a better cover
I've got the contact info for the guy Kevin J Anderson is using on his backlist, if you want. |
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Thanks! That's the kind of support every writer ought to have.
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The one thing I'm not happy about is that the type isn't as bright in the web view as it is viewed directly in the graphics viewer. |
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The red and blue on black isn't pleasing. The font is... odd. It looks unprofessional, but I don't know why. (I'm not in graphic design, nor do I know my typefaces.) The black/blue skewed square gives it a diamond-patterning effect, which I just don't like. If the black didn't extend all the way to the edges I think it would look ok. The wacky psychedelic graphic makes the cover look dated to me. And it reminds me of the unpleasant screen saver from Windows 3.11. EDIT to add: The cover also doesn't tell me anything about your book. "Neptune" implies some sort of water or space-related theme, but the cover doesn't give me any feel for the content of the book. Last edited by queentess; 09-10-2010 at 03:22 PM. |
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09-10-2010, 03:05 PM | #7 |
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What Quentess said
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The font is straight Times New Roman. Maybe what you're responding to is that it doesn't have any of the embellishments that a graphics designer might give it. I'll definitely grant that. As for conveying the book's content, I went with abstract for the following reasons:
Another option might have been to use an image of Neptune. That might have worked for this book, but would have left me without a parallel approach for the second and third books. Those book files aren't ready for upload yet, but here are the covers I've planned: My focus group all felt that the images reflected the content of the books, but then they had all read the books. So that might be a weakness in my focus group. |
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I'll be pondering your comments about the cover, and soliciting others. But in the meantime, I've changed the type color to make it more readable on the online pages:
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09-13-2010, 09:29 PM | #10 |
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The color change makes everything pop a bit more. Let me reach out to a friend or two, see if I can help a brother out.
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Very colorful and eye catching. The Infinite Sea picture reminds me of the jellyfish a little and of course Strange Attractors cover seems very energetic. I think the cover you have for Neptune Crossing looks a bit like a laser pistol being fired.
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09-14-2010, 12:03 AM | #12 |
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I'll agree, I don't think that the first book image is that great....maybe it just is too simple I don't know....I do like the 3rd book image though. But then again, I really don't know anything about making it better, but the way the blue and black mix, just doesn't seem to work.
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