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Old 10-15-2014, 07:18 PM   #1
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Some of you have seen these first two covers, but someone did a new one for me that I wanted your opinion on. Here's the blurb again.

(It's a Nicholas Sparks kind of book called Jamie's Gamble.)

Jamie Thompson is the perfect person. Her CEO father has made sure of that. She has the perfect manners, a perfect tennis backhand and a perfect life. Jamie has a silver spoon in her mouth—and she's gagging on it.

She has to get away.

She's come up with the perfect plan. A friend in a west Texas border town has lined up an accounting job for her, but when Jamie gets there the job has fallen through. But there's a waitress position open at a bar and grill. The one thing Jamie knows is she isn't going back to her father, and so, broke, sixteen hundred miles from home and alone for the first time in her life, she goes for it.

What she finds is a world of gun-toting cowboys, Mexican drug gangs, the occult and a string of brutal rapes and murders. And Ricky Benson, a flame-throwing baseball pitcher, fallen from grace, who she falls head over heels in love with.

But the violence escalates. A fellow waitress is murdered, and Jamie feels like she might be next. Then Ricky Benson is accused of murder.

Jamie can make one phone call and her father will send the company jet for her—or she can stay and face the life that confronts her and fight for the man she loves.

Here are the covers. Thanks.





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Old 10-26-2014, 06:48 PM   #2
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The soft transitions of the 3rd one look better, the others just don't hold together.
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Old 11-01-2014, 12:09 PM   #3
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Old 11-01-2014, 02:05 PM   #4
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I like the third one better.

If you are appealing to a female audience, I believe they will like the third one best, too. I just asked my wife and she agrees... third one.

This person did a nice job for you.

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Old 11-03-2014, 11:44 AM   #5
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The 3rd is beautiful .. but is screams romance to me. My 2¢
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Old 11-04-2014, 10:08 AM   #6
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I must be unconventional. I like the first one best.

Agree that the third screams romance. The first says, "Road trip with romantic subplot." The second says... I'm not sure. Gas station advertisement?
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Old 11-04-2014, 10:11 AM   #7
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The second one says 'Outback' romantic-fiction on a hot, muggy day in a seemingly empty and cheap motel devoid of room service.

The third one SCREAMS romance, romance, and more romance.

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Thanks everyone (including SciFiWriter's wife) for the great feedback. Going with the third one.
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