Sights a Bird (SHORT STORY)

Moejoe · 04-26-2009, 01:13 PM

Recently I wrote a story about Paris, and in that story a cat made an appearance. A kitty with no name or purpose. Well the unasked question is now answered, and here we have Zelda, Queen of the Paris night on her first adventure. An adventure wherein she learns a new secret from an old enemy.

This story was in part inspired by an Emily Dickinson poem, from which it takes its name, and from our own Queen Zelda, who the cat was named after

She sights a Bird - she chuckles -
She flattens - then she crawls -
She runs without the look of feet -
Her eyes increase to Balls -

Her Jaws stir - twitching - hungry -
Her Teeth can hardly stand -
She leaps, but Robin leaped the first -
Ah, Pussy, of the Sand,

The Hopes so juicy ripening -
You almost bathed your Tongue -
When Bliss disclosed a hundred Toes -
And fled with every one -

--Emily Dickinson

Quote:

A shadow in amongst shadows, Zelda purred her way to Montmarte and there took a perch upon the Church of Saint Pierre to see the city from above and find her adventure.

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zelda_pinwheel · 04-26-2009, 01:15 PM

i can't wait to read this story...

dreams · 04-26-2009, 03:25 PM

I'll be out this afternoon but eagerly waiting to check for it tonight when I get back.

Your stories are like little bites of (dark) chocolate (Belgiam, of course

) I savor the reading and smile in remembrance.

Moejoe · 04-26-2009, 03:27 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by dreams

I'll be out this afternoon but eagerly waiting to check for it tonight when I get back.

Your stories are like little bites of (dark) chocolate (Belgiam, of course

) I savor the reading and smile in remembrance.

Now I want chocolate

If only words were chocolates, and they left out all the ones filled with nougat

Moejoe · 04-26-2009, 07:14 PM

Okay, it's now up on Feedbooks

http://www.feedbooks.com/userbook/5305

zelda_pinwheel · 04-26-2009, 07:32 PM

thank you moejoe ! i can't wait to read it.

ShortNCuddlyAm · 04-26-2009, 08:07 PM

Have downloaded it (and your others) - they are now in the queue to read - thank you

dreams · 04-27-2009, 02:54 PM

Wow, another great read

I think they are just getting better and better

Loved the little Z kitty and the thought of birdsong being dreams-- wishes made and repeated.

again for sharing.

zelda_pinwheel · 04-27-2009, 02:55 PM

i loved it too, moejoe.

thanks so much for sharing these with us. i'm looking forward to the collection very much.

Moejoe · 04-27-2009, 02:58 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by dreams

Wow, another great read

I think they are just getting better and better

Loved the little Z kitty and the thought of birdsong being dreams-- wishes made and repeated.

again for sharing.

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Originally Posted by zelda_pinwheel

i loved it too, moejoe.

thanks so much for sharing these with us. i'm looking forward to the collection very much.

I'm glad you enjoyed the story, both of you

These stories are all just playing about, seeing where an idea might go or not go, experiments for the most part. They're never plotted, nor do I have any real idea where they might end up, or how I get there

With this one I just sat down and wrote about the cat heading out into Paris, before I'd typed a few paragraphs the bird arrived and, well the rest just wrote itself.

Oh, and thanks again for taking the time to read my little fancies

netseeker · 04-27-2009, 04:01 PM

Yeah, another great read. Thank you.

PS: Finally i've found the time to really test the Dester Lent Plot. First short story based on it isn't finished yet but it works quite well until now.

Moejoe · 04-27-2009, 04:03 PM

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Originally Posted by netseeker

Yeah, another great read. Thank you.

PS: Finally i've found the time to really test the Dester Lent Plot. First short story based on it isn't finished yet but it works quite well until now.

Cool, I'm glad Dent is working out for you

I know after reading his outline, fiction became a lot easier to understand for me. Oh, and glad you enjoyed the story too

columbus · 04-28-2009, 04:21 AM

Yet another excellent read Moejoe!
Thanks for sharing this. I always enjoy short stories.

There are times in the day when a bite is more than a meal - keep them coming please.

Moejoe · 04-28-2009, 07:50 AM

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Originally Posted by columbus

Yet another excellent read Moejoe!
Thanks for sharing this. I always enjoy short stories.

There are times in the day when a bite is more than a meal - keep them coming please.

Thanks for reading and also enjoying

Don't worry there's plenty more to come. I write about 3 - 4 short stories a week on average

zelda_pinwheel · 04-28-2009, 07:53 AM

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Originally Posted by Moejoe

Thanks for reading and also enjoying

Don't worry there's plenty more to come. I write about 3 - 4 short stories a week on average

excellent news.

04-26-2009, 03:25 PM	#3
dreams It's about the umbrella Posts: 25,112 Karma: 56250158 Join Date: Jan 2009 Device: Sony 505\| K Fire \| KK 3G+Wi-Fi \| iPhone 3Gs \|Vista 32-bit Hm Prem w/FF	I'll be out this afternoon but eagerly waiting to check for it tonight when I get back. Your stories are like little bites of (dark) chocolate (Belgiam, of course) I savor the reading and smile in remembrance.

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Moejoe Banned Posts: 5,100 Karma: 72193 Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: South of the Border Device: Coffin	Okay, it's now up on Feedbooks http://www.feedbooks.com/userbook/5305

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zelda_pinwheel zeldinha zippy zeldissima Posts: 27,827 Karma: 921169 Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Paris, France Device: eb1150 & is that a nook in her pocket, or she just happy to see you?	thank you moejoe ! i can't wait to read it.

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dreams It's about the umbrella Posts: 25,112 Karma: 56250158 Join Date: Jan 2009 Device: Sony 505\| K Fire \| KK 3G+Wi-Fi \| iPhone 3Gs \|Vista 32-bit Hm Prem w/FF	Wow, another great read I think they are just getting better and better Loved the little Z kitty and the thought of birdsong being dreams-- wishes made and repeated. again for sharing.

04-27-2009, 02:55 PM	#9
zelda_pinwheel zeldinha zippy zeldissima Posts: 27,827 Karma: 921169 Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Paris, France Device: eb1150 & is that a nook in her pocket, or she just happy to see you?	i loved it too, moejoe. thanks so much for sharing these with us. i'm looking forward to the collection very much.

04-27-2009, 04:01 PM	#11
netseeker sleepless reader Posts: 4,763 Karma: 615547 Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Germany, near Stuttgart Device: Sony PRS-505, PB 360° & 302, nook wi-fi, Kindle 3	Yeah, another great read. Thank you. PS: Finally i've found the time to really test the Dester Lent Plot. First short story based on it isn't finished yet but it works quite well until now.

04-28-2009, 04:21 AM	#13
columbus Wizard Posts: 999 Karma: 5487540 Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: In my own imagination. Device: Sony Prs 650, 505	Yet another excellent read Moejoe! Thanks for sharing this. I always enjoy short stories. There are times in the day when a bite is more than a meal - keep them coming please.

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