03-07-2012, 10:21 PM | #1 |
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I recently wrote a short story (only about 4000 words) and I would like some feedback on it. I have been writing for several years now but have only received critique from friends or family. Although they are all very critical and made some helpful suggestions, I know they are biased to some degree.
If one person says he or she would be willing to take the time to read my story, I will gladly post it! Thanks in advance for any critiques or opinions! -Ariel |
03-08-2012, 12:06 AM | #2 |
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What genre is your story? Sci-fi, fantasy, horror?
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03-08-2012, 11:17 AM | #5 |
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Well, the short story to which I was referring is somewhere between horror and drama. Although it is a ghost story, it is not so scary that the reader will be afraid of the dark.
I have written one full-fledged novel (about 65,000 words) that is fantasy. |
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03-18-2012, 03:43 PM | #6 | |
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I'm not sure if non-writer readers have a watering hole or are interested in critiquing drafts. Would be really cool if there were some though. |
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