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Old 02-25-2010, 02:23 AM   #1
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Smile Donnerstags-Haiku

Aus aktuellem Anlass ist mir nach einem Donnerstags-Haiku:

Acht Wochen lag Eis -
leg ich mich doch wirklich heut'
auf dem Taueis hin ...


Grrr.

Zwei, drei mal war ich ja schon mal ins Rutschen geraten in den letzten Wochen. Aber heute früh auf dem Rückweg vom Kind-zum-KiGa-Bringen hats mich auf einem schönen dünnen Wasserfilm auf ungeräumtem Gehweg doch erwischt. Bin zwar gleich wieder hochgekommen, aber nun sitz ich hier mit 'nem Kühlakku am rechten Handgelenk im Büro.

Zum Glück bin ich Linkshänder

Hier an der Ostsee taut es nun erstmals seit dem Jahreswechsel richtig ...

Also: Hiermit eröffne ich den Donnerstags-Haiku-Thread.
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Old 02-25-2010, 04:12 AM   #2
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Sonne bricht auf grauem Eis
Matsch liegt träge auf den Straßen
Ein Passant flucht
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Old 02-25-2010, 04:15 AM   #3
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Oder doch lieber 'nen Limerick?

Es war mal ein Junge aus Berlin,
der legt sich mitten im Matsch hin.
Der Schnee halb getaut,
die Kleidung versaut
So zieht sich das wochenlang hin.
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Old 02-26-2010, 03:23 AM   #4
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Sonne bricht auf Eis
Matsch liegt träge auf dem Weg
Ein Passant flucht laut.
Fixed that for you. :-P

Fünf, Sieben und Fünf
Und ein Jahreszeithinweis
Machen ein Haiku.

(frei übersetzt aus dem Englischen :-D )
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Old 02-26-2010, 03:37 AM   #5
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Die 5-7-5 Regel richtet sich nach der japanischen Sprechmelodie. Dass wir im Deutschen daraus einfach 5-7-5 Silben gemacht haben, ist eher eine "freie Übersetzung".

Und die Jahreszeit muss nicht genannt werden, sondern kann auch durch ein Objekt symbolisiert werden, wie "Eis" und "Matsch".

Dein Oberlehrer-Sensei K-Thomusawa

P.S.: Liest sich in deiner verkürzten Fassung aber auch schön.
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Old 02-26-2010, 03:46 AM   #6
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So, dann hier mal das erste eBook-Haiku.

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Old 02-28-2010, 05:13 PM   #7
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Ich genieße gerade Eure Haikus, egal ob die Silben passen oder nicht.
Mehr davon bitte!
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Sieht ja schon nett aus hier.

Heute meine drei Zeilen

Horch, ein Kranich ruft.
Sollte doch schon Frühling sein?
Nein, der Weg ist weiß.


Schönen Tag allerseits.
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Kurz nicht aufgepasst,
schon war - Padautz! - der Donnerstag
mir einfach enteilt.


In diesem Sinne: Schönen Freitag euch allen
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Ins Lesen vertieft
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ist es schon Freitag?
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Tichy
ist verdutzt:
In der Zeitschleife ist nun
auch grad Donnerstag.


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Ins Lesen vertieft
blinzelt ein Bücherwurm auf:
"Ist denn schon Montag?"


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Amt ohne Einsicht
zwingt zu überflüss'gem Brief
bei Sonnenaufgang


Könnte schon weiter sein mit den heutigen Tagesgeschäften, wenn andere
nicht entschieden hätten mir (und sich selbst) eigentlich überflüssige Arbeit zu verschaffen.

Aber wie es aussieht scheint die Sonne heute noch ein bißchen weiter, so dass dieser Quark mir nicht den ganzen Sonnenschein heute vermiesen kann und soll.
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