|05-18-2008, 04:14 AM||#1|
Join Date: May 2008
Location: MD and SD, US
A short story--comments, thoughts, criticisms?
A few months ago I wrote a short story--sort of in the style of Douglas Adams, just a fun, goofy, off the wall science fiction story. I wasn't sure what to do with it, but thanks to smashwords, I could make it available online
If any one would be interested in checking it out, I would absolutely love a critique! It's pretty short, and shouldn't take long to read!
Here's the link:
I'd really like constructive criticism--but please be gentle: it's just something I did for fun!
Thanks a lot
edit: You don't have to pay for it or anything! I just picked "set your own price" on the off chance that anyone would like to contribute to the rapidly shrinking financial resources of a college student
Last edited by Duodora; 05-18-2008 at 04:17 AM.
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