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Originally Posted by CRussel
Yes, he needs a good editor!
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i just read his book Out of the Dark not too long ago and cringed at the page after page of info-dump dialogue between the aliens and repetitive action. its a 500 page or so book, easily 150-200 could have been chopped. dry and redundant doesn't even begin to describe it.
its especially maddening because his action scenes are second to none, i know the man can write.