Nicely written, but your punctuation needs some work. Take that last paragraph:
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He stood up then, news articles flying left and right, he wobbled over towards the officers.
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It's definitely wrong to have two commas in there; I'd suggest either making the first one a semi-colon or an dash, or changing the second one to a full stop.
ie, either:
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He stood up then; news articles flying left and right, he wobbled over towards the officers.
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or
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He stood up then, news articles flying left and right. He wobbled over towards the officers.
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These two alternatives have quite different meanings, of course. You need to decide which one you prefer!