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Old 07-06-2013, 06:53 PM   #54
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Originally Posted by DiapDealer View Post
Spelling/grammar errors.

Elves, dwarves, orcs, dragons, druids.
(and believe it or not ... I'm huge fan of fantasy)

Use of the word "plucky," or "sensation."

Exclamation marks.
Man, but Falkor in the Neverending Story was *such* a plucky dragon! And no, he's not a dog.

Of course you must admit that Frodo has a pluckability level of epic proportions, and that the Elves in that particular story are uncommonly endearing and certainly not aloof

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