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Originally Posted by mr ploppy
Just got the first one from another writer who's not part of my demographic but knows the location really well. He says I need to rework the ending because the police aren't that stupid, but he says he was surprised how much he liked the rest of it because it's not something he would choose to read. He must've read it in one sitting becaue I only sent it out yesterday.
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Now aren't you sorry for calling him a herbert?