Thread: Multiple points of view POVs - why do people get so agitated?
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Old 11-24-2010, 07:02 PM   #9
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@ Luke King - Would you mind giving an example of an ineffictive POV shift? When I write it is usually from what I think is a subjective omniscient POV, often describing various character's internal mindstates all within the same scene. I'm trying to get an idea of how poor my writing is .
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