Thread: Linear narrative (or not)
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Old 11-13-2011, 10:23 AM   #1
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Linear narrative (or not)
Is this something that is likely to annoy people in the same way that present tense writing seems to annoy a few people? I know a lot of it will probably depend on how it is written.

Something like:

1. fight scene part 1
2. 2 hours ago, events leading up to fight.
3. fight scene part 2
4. 6 months ago
5. what happened after the fight
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