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jhempel24 · 12-07-2012, 05:47 AM

I'm going to do something here....and I don't know if I should.

Here is a link to what I have. This is an ongoing project, I know where it's headed, I just don't know "how" it's going to get there yet. I've only started working on it since yesterday....and yes I'm obsessing over it.

https://www.box.com/s/bblll2b2z77ok61evwkh

It's already taken turns I didn't plan, and I'm kind of starting to understand the "characters do whatever they want" thing that I never could grasp.

Any constructive criticism and help would be great if you have the time. After trying to write before, and just flat out stopping because I couldn't go anywhere, I have been typing away at this.

12-07-2012, 05:47 AM	#8
jhempel24 Wizard Posts: 2,157 Karma: 7068605 Join Date: Dec 2007 Device: Amazon Kindle Paperwhite, B&N Nook Colro	I'm going to do something here....and I don't know if I should. Here is a link to what I have. This is an ongoing project, I know where it's headed, I just don't know "how" it's going to get there yet. I've only started working on it since yesterday....and yes I'm obsessing over it. https://www.box.com/s/bblll2b2z77ok61evwkh It's already taken turns I didn't plan, and I'm kind of starting to understand the "characters do whatever they want" thing that I never could grasp. Any constructive criticism and help would be great if you have the time. After trying to write before, and just flat out stopping because I couldn't go anywhere, I have been typing away at this.