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Originally Posted by Peverel
Currently working on a short story set in the near future - next 100 years. Told from the perspective of a dead man......
Starts like this:
So I died, and to be totally honest with you it was a lot more painful than I had expected. A hell of a lot more painful. But then again I am fairly sure that you are not supposed to remember the actual death part, if you know what I mean.
No, you don't, do you?
You're aware of Life Extension Technologies Inc.?
No?
Okay, I think I had better explain a little.
Actually, I had better go back to the very beginning really.
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I like that sort of thing. A suggestion: add in a bit more confusion to show that the process is fairly traumaitc from a psychologic perspective.