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I finished reading it the other day. I really enjoyed it. I thought the neighbors were a bit forced in their characters and the resolution, but that's just me.
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Nah, I think you're right. There are still a few weak bits in it, and the neighbours could do with fleshing out. I suspect that I will go back to it in a couple of years and do a proper rewrite... probably get it closer to 'novel' length.
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I thought it was a great read and would recommend it. The swearing didn't bother me because it fit the story and the characters.
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Yay! I'm glad you enjoyed it :-)
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I really like the cover too  |
MoeJoe is a brilliant man
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Forgot to add that I'm looking forward to more of your work.
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Cool!
I have a short work up on FeedBooks atm - it's had almost zero editing though, so it's pretty rough -
Red Riding Hood.