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Old 03-07-2013, 11:24 AM   #54
JSWolf
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Originally Posted by teh603 View Post
Here's how I was taught:

It was going to rain today; the man carried his umbrella.

Two contextually-related independent clauses, no splice needed other than the semicolon.
That doesn't actually read all that well.

The man carried his umbrella because it was going to rain today.

That actually reads a lot better (IMHO).
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