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Old 08-28-2011, 10:44 AM   #14
Jack Tingle
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Your paragraphs are too long, your sentence structure is too complex, and using a non-standard font confuses the reader's eye.

You missed the point with Palin. I may think she's a putz, but she's a putz with something to say. Based on your post, you're weak in this area.

As for the 80/20 thing, Pareto's rule.

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