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Old 05-15-2012, 05:11 PM   #3
Mironsch
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Beautiful, beautiful work, once again. Thank you so much for your efforts!

I have only thrown a quick look at "The Importance of Beaing Earnest", and it seems that there is some error concerning the character names. In the beginning, Algernon talks to Algernon instead of Lane, and this repeats later in the First Act when Lane returns. It's only mildly confusing, and doesn't seem to occur at any other place (as far as I have checked), but should probably be fixed...
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