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Old 02-21-2012, 07:29 PM   #2
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It has a vampire feel. The very opening sounded a touch like Jonathan Maberry's Patient Zero but then you diverged.

I can imagine a trilogy (infection, hunt, cure). It sounds like a lot to put into one book. As usual, whether it sucks or not will be in your writing. The broad sketch sounds workable, if ambitious, to me. So what's your essential theme, perfection is bad?
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